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No voice acting is far superior to bad voice acting. But trust us pal, you need to find a voice actor or actress for the voices. Computer generated ones are simply a no-go in most cases.
Regardless, this was a step up from the last outing. The music selection is good and the extra scenes were certainly more helpful in understanding what's happening.

Again, looking forward to your improvement. But PLEASE, take our suggestions into account. Ditch the computer voice and give it a human touch!

So I have no doubt in my mind that your story has potential. I am quite curious as to where you are leading us. This is your first episode and you deserve the benefit of the doubt. You'll improve with each consecutive episode...
But here's what need to improve. You should get voice actors rather than that computer generated voice. It's tacked on and completely sucks one out of the video. And the dialogue... I'm assuming English is your second language? You should have an English speaking colleague review your lines for you and correct your grammar. It seriously detracts from the video.
The animation feels a little stiff... But it's your first video. You will inevitably improve.
In a nutshell, there's potential. But the audio needs to be addressed.
Looking forward to your next video so we can see your improvement!

Not bad for procrastination!
Story wasn't bad and the artwork was nice for what it was. Nice work!

Entertaining animation throughout. And your sense of humor is to be admired. Nice work to you and your team!

mattyburrito responds:

Thank you for watching! :) Were so glad you like it!

Congrats on the #1 spot for the day. You're animation style earned it, aside from the subject matter. Very smooth, squishy, organic. Great job!

RetroSleep responds:

Thanks! This is my first 1st place so I'm really exited about it.

That was quite fluid artwork and animation. Also, the spot on humor, dialogue, and voice acting were a huge positive.
You've done well!

Carbonwater responds:

Thanks man!

That was pretty funny... the quip with Korra had me rolling, despite the fact I love that character.
Right on man!

WooleyWorld responds:

ikr. You can laugh either way. :p

My brother and I were absolutely busting up at the end.
Funny joke!

GhostToastAnimation responds:

Thanks! I was worried the timing was a little too fast. Glad It made you guys laugh! :)

... From now on, should I resume Slender, my death shall no longer feel like murder at the hands of a supernatural psychopathic entity. It's justice.
Wonderful animation work, and touching music and story.

GhostToastAnimation responds:

Thank you so much!

Loved the simplicity. I hope you find inspiration for another!

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