So! For one, thank you so much for choosing that particular piece for a musical composition. I love what you made here!
I wish you had messaged me so we could perhaps speak a bit about the tone of the image and story relating to it so it could be more wholly reflected. While I love what you have made, its a bit too high energy.
I find the 2nd half of the composition superior and far closer to what I imagined the sound design for this particular tale would entail. Its quite lovely with a haunting implications, if just a little too uplifting for so terrible an event as warfare. I frankly wish that segment received more attention and elaboration.
The overall piece is a real treat to hear, and I am happy to have heard another piece from you based on my stuff! Please feel free to message me in the future if you're looking for new ideas!